Until Death Do Us Part

“Bury him in his jeans, it’s ok,” said the funeral director, so I brought his favorite pair, the old Levis hanging on the bathroom door, checking the pockets again for more wrong numbers.

Inspired by the wonderful folks at Trifecta Writing Challenge who issued this dare: 33 words on love gone wrong not using any of these words: love, sad, tears, wept, heart, pain.

19 Comments on “Until Death Do Us Part

  1. Ouch! I love the checking for wrong numbers part, it reveals so much about the character’s situation and their relationship.

  2. I’ve tried my hand but don’t think I can best you! Thanks for the laugh, although I felt a bit guilty laughing . . .

  3. I like how you capture the way the exact state of mind of the character here. Clearly it all just happened, and it hasn’t quite hit. At least, that’s what I got out of it.

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