Red's Wrap
Happiness. It's relative.
Commitment
Leave your mark, your cash
Tack what matters on the wall
Empty your pockets
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The brusque tone is mirrored so well in the short verse! Love it when structure and tone come together well.
This has a nice ring to it. I like it.
I like the bluntness here, and the imagery of “cash on the wall.” It’s a tiny poem that pulls no punches.